The article “An Education in Citizenship” that was published in the Chicago Tribute Editorial on March 31, 2003. Talks about how important are to be a citizen in the USA. Almost every state requires that all college students have to pay tuition. Immigrants student have to this tuition more than a citizen student. The state of Illinois has passed a law in which it states that they should let illegal students pay in-state tuition at any Illinois college or university.
The author says “No one wants to see any able student deprived of a good higher education”. I agree with the authors point of view because we all capable of learning something new every day. I also, think that every student out there should be able to pay the in-state tuition payment that way they are able to attend college and have a better future.
I have my own personal experience am an immigrant student and I have to pay more than what any student from New York pays. I don’t think is fair because we all should have the same right so we are all able to attend to school.
In this country having the citizenship is something important. Citizenship is the definition of the rights and responsibilities and this is why young immigrants in Illinois and other states cannot reach their goals because they cannot afford to pay the tuition or them not citizens.
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